Okay, this is the post for OUR book. Here's the scenario, in case you've forgotten:
"A Pirate's life is violent by nature. There is no integrity or morale character in this kill or be killed business. After years of sailing, robbing, raping, killing, has he finally met the one person that could change his way of life?" Or does he simply pretend to be drawn toward her so he may get his hands on her families wealth and power?"
Each week I will pick my favorite submission and post it, along with the author's information (only what he/she wants publicized). It will be posted under the topic "A Pirates Life for Mary" on Monday, February 16, 2009.
Comment to this post with your submissions. Remember, this is a "cooperative book", so lets keep everything no more than "R" rated, please.
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karljkampovsky said:
ReplyDeleteCaptain Chaz Post, Boards a merchant ship sailing under the French flag in the Carribbean! He did not notice immediately the portrait of the sparkling beauty that would come to dominate his thoughts until he could find her! It was not until his ship "Marauder" reached its home port of Port Royal Jamaica that he would see the portrait.
When he did see this portrait his only thought was making this beaut his. But where in the world was she?
Keli i would love to do this..yet i am unclear of the requirements..like do you expect to continue the story...?or do u want us to write our own versions...and then will you mix them up(which of course is great idea..) but then ther wud be a lot of conflict in the narration,plot,conversasion et cetrea..please reply back to me..and i surely want to help the 'OUR BOOK" loved the idea by the way...which by now i thought should have been obvius..hehe
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today his giant pride stood as a shame to his eyes.he would want to plunge into the sense of pride again,yet he was forced back by some power under the sun. the nature today seemed punctilious,watching his every move.he at last stood like a rock and saw her. He was a fearless man. he knew that his pride would never sink, he knew they could never defeat him. but then would he want to be defeated from her. yes he wanted her to come once again.he wanted the beast in him to be slain once and for all. the unscrupulous creature, the ugly monster in him mocked him.she walked away, he never felt so hurt. even though he was never taught to take insults,endure a women's tantrums and her silly requests, he wanted to love them.(i have left the character s unmaned,..i still dint understand waht you want me to do..lols..anyways...if u like tis..then today is my lucky day..lol)
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I just read your discussion thread on BC and stopped to say Hi!
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Ryan II said...
ReplyDeleteHis purple glazed eyes, watching the sea ahead of him. The sun low, shining horizontally onto the water and reflecting into his sensitive eyes. He had just woken up to the shattering sound of glass, the bottle he just dropped. Dazed, with a headache, his voice softly spilled out, "sunset or sunrise?"
February 18, 2009 8:32 AM